biography of Shannon Brame

WALT write biography.

We wrote biographies because we are learning about your families.

We wrote biographies to tell other people about someone special in your family.

Shannon Brame is my mum and the best mum ever.

Shannon Brame was born in Auckland on 14th of January. Her favourite childhood  memory is of going to Disneyland with her cousins,her sister and her Grandparents.

Shannon Brame went to Manuka Primary, Glenfield Intermediate and Glenfield College. Shannon’s first job was a receptionist at a beauty salon.

Shannon’s favourite food is Chinese. Her favourite colour is blue.

A funny thing that has happened to Shannon is that she fell in the creek at school camp in 2018.

I am so happy that she is my mum.

Shannon Bra

 

Descriptive Writing

WALT: Use Descriptive word and language to make our writing more interesting.

We did this writing to practise using Descriptive words and language.


The big smelly elephant was walking carefully in the jungle.🐘

The elephant is a spy.

The sea slowly splashed on the seaweed.


Two things I think I did well is metaphors and alliteration. Next time I want to do more work on nouns, verbs, adverbs and adjectives.

my Family Story Animation

WALT: We have been learning about our families.

 We have been learning the stories of our families.

  We have been learning to tell stories though animations in Slides. 

 We have been learning to record using Screencastify. 

We created this because we wanted to be able to share and save the special from our families.

Two things i did well are  telling the story  and finding the transparent people.

next time i do not want to talk that much when i do  my animation.

do you like what you see?