Mackenzie and Amber's character Map

 WALT-WALT: infer character's thoughts and feelings. Acknowledge how a character reacts to unique situations in a narrative text.

Reflection-  I like drawing our character it was really fun drawing her outfit and hair. I found it quite hard writing about what others think about her. something I can improve on is using more interesting words in my writing.

Mackenzie and Amber narritive

WALT-Write a narrative around a value or a moral.   Reflection-  I found it a bit hard to think about what to write. But Amber came up with an idea and I enjoyed making it with her.

The day things started disappearing

 WALT-  Edit our Easstle writing samples by using a range of editing organise our ideas to write a narrative using the elements of a narrative story.

Reflection-  I did well with my paragraph I think I can do better on my describing word.

My postcard

 WALT: recount a memory from our holiday and write a short summary for a friend.

We had to start by writing to a friend and telling them a cool part of our holidays. Then after that we had to find or make a stamp where we where. Then last we have to find a picture of where we are at the first slide.

I liked finding the picture or the first slide but it was a bit hard to find what one I want. I also enjoyed writing my letter to my friend.

have you ever made a postcard to a friend?

my holiday recount

we had to recount events from our holidays this is what I created.
reflection: my favourite part of the holidays was going to see my cousins. My least favourite part of the holidays was waking up at  6.00 am to drop my mum off for work. and next school holidays i want to do more things.
what did you do in your school holidays?

Pick-A-Path Adventure.

WALT make a pick-a-path story.

WALT write interesting sentences by adding detail.
WALT use Google Slides in different ways.

We created this using Google Slides.
You need to open the slides so you can choose you own adventure!

I think I did good at the writing and the pictures. next time I want to be faster at doing my pick a path.

Do you like my pick a path???

Descriptive Writing

WALT: Use Descriptive word and language to make our writing more interesting.

We did this writing to practise using Descriptive words and language.


The big smelly elephant was walking carefully in the jungle.🐘

The elephant is a spy.

The sea slowly splashed on the seaweed.


Two things I think I did well is metaphors and alliteration. Next time I want to do more work on nouns, verbs, adverbs and adjectives.

My family publishing

WALT organise our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only talking about one thing or person at a time.

My family

In my family I have  Mum,dad ,my brother and me.

My dad is called Lawrence.
He is a builder.
 my  dad lives in Cable Bay.
 He is  a 39 years old.
 my dad was born in  Auckland.
 He likes to watch TV.

 My mum is Shannon.
 She is 38 years old.
 she Lives in Cable Bay.
She was born in Auckland.
She likes to eat chocolate.

My brother is called Liam.
  He is 6 years old.
 He is my little  brother.
 He is very  annoying.
 he lives in Cable Bay.
 He loves to watch his tablet.

I have a cat his name is Robbie.
He is cute, he is grey.
 He likes to sleep in my bed and my mum's bed.
He is 1 year old.
He lives in Cable Bay.

 I have a cat called Molly.
She likes to sleep in my mum's bed.
 She is black.
 She is 21 years old.
She is cute.

I have a puppy called cookie.
She is naughty because she chases cars.
She bites me and i say “stop it!”
She is one year old.
She is cute.
She is black.

My dog is called Welo.
She is 11 years old.
She is cute.
She likes  to sleep in the sun,she is black.

I LOVE MY FAMILY SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Reflection:
I did well on the paragraphs and spelling names
I wish I could have more key words.