WALT-WALT: infer character's thoughts and feelings. Acknowledge how a character reacts to unique situations in a narrative text.
Reflection- I like drawing our character it was really fun drawing her outfit and hair. I found it quite hard writing about what others think about her. something I can improve on is using more interesting words in my writing.
I think this was quite a difficult Character Map and both you and Amber have done a great job working together and supporting each other while completing it! Here is some feedback :-
ReplyDeleteI would like you to be more specific when writing about how your character acts, and what others think of your character (I think you lost your way a little bit). I think your reflection was a valid one, ie, by using more interesting words you will capture your audience and make the writing more enjoyable and exciting to read. But don't be too hard on yourself as you are making important observations within your writing and you can only get better and better by these small but effective improvements.
You girls have done a great job a few little things could be improved but your on the right track keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteTena korua Mackenzie and Amber. What a fantastic character map about your main character in your narrative. It has plenty of great detail and I wonder if you could add that detail into your narrative so that the quality of your writing increases!?
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Heya Macka and Amber. This is certainly a great start for a character map. Yes there is some things you could improve on especially in the way she looks and feels. You could use more expressive language like you started with deep blue eyes, I really like that. Good job girls and keep the creativity up!
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