Descriptive Writing

WALT: Use Descriptive word and language to make our writing more interesting.

We did this writing to practise using Descriptive words and language.


The big smelly elephant was walking carefully in the jungle.🐘

The elephant is a spy.

The sea slowly splashed on the seaweed.


Two things I think I did well is metaphors and alliteration. Next time I want to do more work on nouns, verbs, adverbs and adjectives.

my Family Story Animation

WALT: We have been learning about our families.

 We have been learning the stories of our families.

  We have been learning to tell stories though animations in Slides. 

 We have been learning to record using Screencastify. 

We created this because we wanted to be able to share and save the special from our families.

Two things i did well are  telling the story  and finding the transparent people.

next time i do not want to talk that much when i do  my animation.

do you like what you see?

My family publishing

WALT organise our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only talking about one thing or person at a time.

My family

In my family I have  Mum,dad ,my brother and me.

My dad is called Lawrence.
He is a builder.
 my  dad lives in Cable Bay.
 He is  a 39 years old.
 my dad was born in  Auckland.
 He likes to watch TV.

 My mum is Shannon.
 She is 38 years old.
 she Lives in Cable Bay.
She was born in Auckland.
She likes to eat chocolate.

My brother is called Liam.
  He is 6 years old.
 He is my little  brother.
 He is very  annoying.
 he lives in Cable Bay.
 He loves to watch his tablet.

I have a cat his name is Robbie.
He is cute, he is grey.
 He likes to sleep in my bed and my mum's bed.
He is 1 year old.
He lives in Cable Bay.

 I have a cat called Molly.
She likes to sleep in my mum's bed.
 She is black.
 She is 21 years old.
She is cute.

I have a puppy called cookie.
She is naughty because she chases cars.
She bites me and i say “stop it!”
She is one year old.
She is cute.
She is black.

My dog is called Welo.
She is 11 years old.
She is cute.
She likes  to sleep in the sun,she is black.

I LOVE MY FAMILY SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Reflection:
I did well on the paragraphs and spelling names
I wish I could have more key words.

DIGITAL PEPEHA

WALT: Say our pepeha.
WALT:Animate in google slides.



Two things I think I did really well were how I did the shapes in the background and the writing in the text boxes.     
Next time I think I can make it look better by using a moving background.

The legend of Mangonui

WALT: Share a story using google slides

All about me

I remember when my family went to Fiji for my brothers birthday. We stayed there for 10 days. There was a pool and bikes, we went for bike rides. I was sad when we had to leave to go back home but our house was clean because someone was looking after our pets.

I love my mum and dad and my brother Liam and I like ice cream.

A fun fact about me is that I like animals. I like elephants and cats and dogs.

Sometimes my brother Liam makes me laugh by being silly and my kitten Robbie sometime makes me laugh too. Sometimes I run past him and he chases me and tries to bite me and my puppy makes me laugh because when I go down the slide she comes down the slide with me.

HARRY POTTER

Harry just got off the train looking where he is going but he can't see a lot. There is a lot of steam it was so steamy that Harry got lost. His ears was so mad because there was a lot of noise. It was so noisy Harry said I am confused. He did not know where to go. It was like a zoo. He went to for his cousin's birthday because there was so much cats and birds . Then Harry remembered  where he is going so he went there. He stopped and got confused and said I do not remember where to go. Then Harry saw an owl and it looked liked his owl. So he went to see where the owl was going. The owl stopped Harry stopped too. Harry looked around and found where he is going so off he went. He was so so happy that he is on his way. Wherever he goes, he talks to his owl. His owl just went to sleep. That gave Harry an d idea. So he did his idea. His idea was to go to sleep. He was not sleepy, but he went to sleep. "Zzzzzzzz"
He woke up. He was not there yet. His owl was still asleep. He thought about what to do. His owl woke up. Harry knows what to do now. Talks to his owl. His owl just sat there. Harry said to her "If you talk me I will leave you, so you can sleep.  Harry's owl said "yes".
Harry began talking to the owl and he stopped talking. The owl went to sleep like Harry said. Harry saw a big tree. It turned out it was not a big tree, it was a lot of owls. He was at the train stop and saw a big man. Harry knew that man. The big man said "Come here Harry." So Harry came to the big man. The big man said "Let's go to my house."
"Okay" said Harry, and off they went.