creating complex sentences

WALT use conjunction to create complex sentences.

We created this to show the complex sentences we worked on, with our buddy and to show off our favourite one.

This is my favourite sentence because it is funny . 😂 

biography of Shannon Brame

WALT write biography.

We wrote biographies because we are learning about your families.

We wrote biographies to tell other people about someone special in your family.

Shannon Brame is my mum and the best mum ever.

Shannon Brame was born in Auckland on 14th of January. Her favourite childhood  memory is of going to Disneyland with her cousins,her sister and her Grandparents.

Shannon Brame went to Manuka Primary, Glenfield Intermediate and Glenfield College. Shannon’s first job was a receptionist at a beauty salon.

Shannon’s favourite food is Chinese. Her favourite colour is blue.

A funny thing that has happened to Shannon is that she fell in the creek at school camp in 2018.

I am so happy that she is my mum.

Shannon Bra

 

Descriptive Writing

WALT: Use Descriptive word and language to make our writing more interesting.

We did this writing to practise using Descriptive words and language.


The big smelly elephant was walking carefully in the jungle.🐘

The elephant is a spy.

The sea slowly splashed on the seaweed.


Two things I think I did well is metaphors and alliteration. Next time I want to do more work on nouns, verbs, adverbs and adjectives.

my Family Story Animation

WALT: We have been learning about our families.

 We have been learning the stories of our families.

  We have been learning to tell stories though animations in Slides. 

 We have been learning to record using Screencastify. 

We created this because we wanted to be able to share and save the special from our families.

Two things i did well are  telling the story  and finding the transparent people.

next time i do not want to talk that much when i do  my animation.

do you like what you see?

My family publishing

WALT organise our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only talking about one thing or person at a time.

My family

In my family I have  Mum,dad ,my brother and me.

My dad is called Lawrence.
He is a builder.
 my  dad lives in Cable Bay.
 He is  a 39 years old.
 my dad was born in  Auckland.
 He likes to watch TV.

 My mum is Shannon.
 She is 38 years old.
 she Lives in Cable Bay.
She was born in Auckland.
She likes to eat chocolate.

My brother is called Liam.
  He is 6 years old.
 He is my little  brother.
 He is very  annoying.
 he lives in Cable Bay.
 He loves to watch his tablet.

I have a cat his name is Robbie.
He is cute, he is grey.
 He likes to sleep in my bed and my mum's bed.
He is 1 year old.
He lives in Cable Bay.

 I have a cat called Molly.
She likes to sleep in my mum's bed.
 She is black.
 She is 21 years old.
She is cute.

I have a puppy called cookie.
She is naughty because she chases cars.
She bites me and i say “stop it!”
She is one year old.
She is cute.
She is black.

My dog is called Welo.
She is 11 years old.
She is cute.
She likes  to sleep in the sun,she is black.

I LOVE MY FAMILY SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Reflection:
I did well on the paragraphs and spelling names
I wish I could have more key words.

DIGITAL PEPEHA

WALT: Say our pepeha.
WALT:Animate in google slides.



Two things I think I did really well were how I did the shapes in the background and the writing in the text boxes.     
Next time I think I can make it look better by using a moving background.

The legend of Mangonui

WALT: Share a story using google slides