"Nau Mai haere mai -I am in a Year 5 and 6 class called Kotuku at Mangonui School and my teacher is Miss van der Voort. Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience. There may be mistakes but I look forward to your helpful, thoughtful and kind comments."
Wednesday, 28 February 2018
The Boy and the puppy
Once there was a boy who loved video games and when the boys mum got home there was a box on the table. The boy opened the box and he saw a puppy but he didn't like it because the puppy had 3 legs. Once the puppy saw a red ball he got it then took it to the boy. Next the boy threw the ball. After that the puppy got the ball again and again. After a while the boy got the ball and finally the puppy and the boy went outside. The boy said to his mum "me and the puppy are going outside." After that they played and then they were friends They kept playing. The boy had one leg and the puppy had 3 legs. The boy loved his puppy and the puppy loved the boy. The End
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