"Nau Mai haere mai -I am in a Year 5 and 6 class called Kotuku at Mangonui School and my teacher is Miss van der Voort.
Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience.
There may be mistakes but I look forward to your helpful, thoughtful and kind comments."
WALT-write a script to support your narrative.
Reflection- We made a script to support our narrative. We took turns writing and reading it so it was fair. It was fun writing the narrative with Amber!
Congratulations Mackenzie (Mac) - Great team work !! You and Amber (Arc) have both worked super hard on this piece of writing. That was a safe and very clever thing to ring one another for each other's input to produce this fantastic work. I am looking forward to reading further work of yours !
Ka pai to mahi Mackenzie and Amber. I enjoyed reading your narrative script. I particularly liked the detail in your writing in your third paragraph, it creates a great picture and tells me lots about the characters. Use this level of detail throughout your writing!
Kia Ora. Thank you for visiting my blog, I would love a thoughtful, helpful and kind comment. All comments are moderated by my teacher so there may be a delay before they appear.
Congratulations Mackenzie (Mac) - Great team work !! You and Amber (Arc) have both worked super hard on this piece of writing. That was a safe and very clever thing to ring one another for each other's input to produce this fantastic work. I am looking forward to reading further work of yours !
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DeleteKa pai to mahi Mackenzie and Amber. I enjoyed reading your narrative script. I particularly liked the detail in your writing in your third paragraph, it creates a great picture and tells me lots about the characters. Use this level of detail throughout your writing!
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